which one

[groundsboy3]

which one should i use. they were in diffferent rooms so sound is different.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WxlST9sfwj0

or this one

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-QnZ2CeDm6E

[GOOSEHANSON]

your second one is waayyy better...don't like your first one compared to the others...on the second one like I have said before, you need to shorten up your laydown on the end...you have some good sounds that are different then others but too many trick notes to make not sound overdone...watch some of the repetitive notes going through your intermediate to laydown too....but the second was the best of the two...joe

[Nick McArthur]

First one was put together better, some of the sounds are better, and flowed better. BUT, I would recommend after the opening hail calls on both, to work into it a little bit, instead of right into some intermediate stuff....come out a little slower and then speed it up. Also, you need to work on your laydown and it consisting of more than just kazoo notes (the 2nd was a little better in that respect)....some of it is good, but you need to have that big goose in there some place looking to tear some **** up clucking, murmuring......and even slow that down a bit too and not try and fit some much in there at the end.

You had some unique sounds on your build ups and come downs, definitely stick with those, very good, and I ain't really heard em done that way YET....pretty good!!! Second one cleaned up would be a great one!!